Beauty Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

Beauty

Rating: 4.8


(dedicated to Niken Kusuma Wardani)

Restore the tresses
With hair breakthroughs
For a fun, take on a make up
It’s time to feel pink

Cut the frills, and get back
To the facial basics
For a clear complexion
Adopt a clear change with rosy eyes

(inspired by Robert Schumann’s Cello Concerto in A minor)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Niken Kusuma Wardani 10 November 2008

Hi, Tks for yr thought Ahmad, i like the way you describe beauty. I wish i have even a slice of yr idea to knitted the words and make a luxurious outfit to pay my gratitude to you.

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Ben Gieske 11 November 2008

Has a nice crisp rhythm to it.

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Tapas Baidya 12 November 2008

Simply beautiful. Thanks for sharing such natural beauty. Tapas Baidya, Kolkata, India.

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Adeiza A. 12 November 2008

Nicely expressed Ahmed. This is good

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Lynda Robson 14 November 2008

Concise and clear, well written Lynda

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Raj Nandy 22 March 2009

We are born rich in beauty to blossom and bloom, But keep getting poorer as we grow; True beauty lies in our mind and heart, We always reap what we sow! - composed by Raj Nandy as a compliment! A perfect ten!

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Riquetta Elliott 21 February 2009

A very lovely poem Ahmad. Very nice.

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Blue Eyes 27 December 2008

very nice poem keep the gud work it really deserves a 10.

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Sebastine Humaemo 17 December 2008

simple, short and a pleasant way to speak about beauty....regards sebastine...

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 18 November 2008

A beautiful symphony of words....!

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

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Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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