Beauty Poem by Ma. Cristina Balsamo

Beauty

Rating: 4.5


Beauty? Yes it’s an asset
But people forget
That real beauty is in the heart
Which everybody must have a part

What a macho image he has
But God forbids what he does
For many ladies he is involved
Only to be played not loved

So good looks don’t quite count
To a person’s total account
It’s character that ultimately prevails
As one’s winning asset that never fails.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Aparejo 19 October 2013

well-written piece. There are many faces of beauty. But for us, the truest realm of beauty is, when we can write what is inside us. Rated 10++++

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Sandra Feldman 10 October 2013

How true this is, Prevailing character, depth of ideas and soul, are what really lasts and takes hold. Very nicely written, beautiful message.

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Queeny Gona 10 October 2013

Beauty is in the eyes of perceiver- a caring heart, loving nature, helping hand...! But most of all outward appearance is graded as beauty! Those that play with beauty will sure receive their part for their wholesome deeds!

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Ma. Cristina Balsamo

Ma. Cristina Balsamo

Lunao, Gingoog City
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