Beauty Poem by Tobias Gray

that was a very beautiful poem..i like it..~hazel

The biggest things go taken for granted so true.

I loved this poem! ! God's creation is meant to be noticed and appreciated... you accomplished that through this poem! ! ! ~Lacey~

'It may go unnoticed for days But in the end you see the true beauty in it' This is beautiful writing and creates a reader become emotional, but the above two lines amazing (To me) As the image of sitting on some of the remotest beaches Australia can offer and seeing the shores never ending.. hence in the end you do see the true beauty in it.. And futher into your poem the dramatic change in style is striking but i believe worked well.. The one word, one line technique worked and made the reader feel compelled to read on.. And wasn't dispointed. Thank you, Mel xxx

There is so much beauty in the world and you captured some of it in this delightful nature poem. Great job! A '10! ' Best Wishes Marilyn

I like this poem! its cute

There is so much beauty all around and we poets must capture them and bring them out of their hiding place. Well written. Thanks for sharing.

very true we devour beauty with those five...you have brought it out beautifully

nice..i've been thinking about this subject a lot recently and wondering if you didn't have your senses could something still be beautiful?

Great Title and no real way to explain other then Beautiful.Great Job! 10