ishwar patil

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Beauty Within - Poem by ishwar patil

a day in my dream
me saw a beaut flower
just blossomed in a soar
so beautiful, so charming
so elegantly ashore;

colored like others
shaped like others
but still a different soul
being so simple, but still so marvellous
that's the diligence she bore;

i gazed at her
as a beau gaze her love
me adored her
as a adorer adore his idol
unconciousness in the amazement;

not keen, came out of dream
and woke up in a brood
tried to find that masterpiece
who took away my hearty soul;

i searched in the gardens
searched near ponds
searched every corner where sunlight can reach
but did not find that little divine
and sat in helplessness indeed;

wait! there's one place, where i have not searched yet
and beget to search within
through my inner eyes, i peeped in my heart
and found that beauty flourishing sweetly
within my ownself;

'in the core of my heart'

Poet's Notes about The Poem

in the remembrance of my love i wrote this poem. i dedicate this poem to my love girl(my love beauty)

Comments about Beauty Within by ishwar patil

  • Gold Star - 70,859 Points Gajanan Mishra (12/13/2013 10:55:00 PM)

    within my own-self, good write, go on..
    I invite you to read my poems and comment. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 13, 2013

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