Because I Do....... Poem by XxAmieLee xX

Because I Do.......

Rating: 5.0


You ask me why I love you,
Because I do

You ask why I do those little things, like look into your eyes,
Because I do

You ask me why I stay with you,
Because I do

You ask me why I get secretive,
Because I do

You ask me why I get agressive,
Because I do

You ask me why I cheat on you,
Because I do.............

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
love and death 21 September 2008

it's simple but shows a lot of emotion

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Tanya Stanford 28 August 2008

lol. I must admit I was suprised with the ending.

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A job well done Amie- Lee, GREAT! ! ! Love Melladee! ! ;)

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Alison Cassidy 13 March 2008

Love the Jeckel and Hyde nature of this one - and it's assertive song-like repetition is bold and poetic. When I first read it, I thought it was your voice. Now I'm wondering? And thinking it might be referring to someone else? A male perhaps. Great piece, either way. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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No punches pulled here, young lady...You do have your say.And your sincerity, as well as the flow of this work is to be commended.Job well done, Amie. ~ FjR ~

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