Because Of This Wall Poem by Flame6203E ...

Because Of This Wall

Rating: 5.0


the night is a,
beautiful time,
it's a time when,
noone can see,
your feelings,
noone can see,
you cry,
the hidden emotions,
that come alive at night,
they all hide from the light,
so noone ever knows,
what your really feeling,
a wall between,
you and the world,
and hardly anyone has,
the ladder,
the ladder that will let,
them get to the other side,
but hey will have to expect,
a huge drop,
and a great pain,
and you don't think that,
anyone is game enough,
to use the ladder they have,
and fall from a great height,
just to rescue you,
from your own feelings,
because with every day that passes,
the wall grows higher,
and with every dis,
and words of disencouragement,
the wall grows stronger,
soon the wall will be too high,
and too strong,
and you think you will have to withdraw completely,
instead of trying to get out yourself,
noone ever knows what your feeling,
because of this wall,
but do know,
that there is always someone willing,
to climb and fall,
to be hurt but continue on,
just for your sake,
because no matter who you are,
there will always be someone,
in this world,
who will love you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
jazmine kristen 13 September 2007

can I resuce u? ? ..................

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cool poem i like it!

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Hali Curtis 29 September 2007

Is there anyway I could save u...I'll risk my life!

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Linda Izundu 10 October 2007

wow I really love this poem

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Lilly Mandrell 21 October 2007

I really like this poem. I know how that feels.

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Kat , sorrow 14 January 2009

This is a wonderful poem. thank you. Love, Kat sorrow

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Tyease Collins 23 June 2008

Beautiful. I love the metaphors. I love this poem so much ♥ **Tyease**

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 26 May 2008

another break in the wall is what you gotta get.nice write and great efforts.10 for this.

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Make A Wish 05 April 2008

: O wow it is amazing! ! ! i thought i was bad, but this is worse than me, and brought out in better writing than i could ever write! ! ! ! you are WONDERFUL!

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Keyra King 08 March 2008

! ! ! ! MAN! ! ! ! ! ! this poem is amazeiing your detail used to describe the fact that know gets you and no one knows you is amazeing this poem is one of a kind only a true poet can write like that! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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