Because You Would Smile... Poem by Khairul Ahsan

Because You Would Smile...

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Because you would smile,
The high sky dispatched some clouds
To descend and stay above your head,
So that your smile wouldn't soon be dead.

Because you would laugh,
The crying baby took a break,
So that her cries wouldn't muffle your laughter,
The acoustic of which is so much sought after.

Because you would smile,
The thunders and lightnings paused for a while,
So that the woods and the oceans would gleam
With the soft rays that your smile would beam.

Because you would smile,
The full moon quietly hid under the cloud,
So that the glow of your lustrous smile
Wouldn't be hidden under the lunar shroud.

But alas! Despite all these, you didn't smile.
So the clouds precipitated, the baby resumed
Its fits of cries, the thunders roared and the
Lightnings flashed, and the moon ball eclipsed.

As soon as you would again smile,
All these flurries would rest for a while.
Your smile has got a very unique style,
To humans and nature it is equally versatile.


Dhaka
07 October 2014
Copyright Reserved.

Tuesday, October 7, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: smile
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Lady, please smile again!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Beach Girl 15 October 2014

Brilliant! I love the way you conveyed your thoughts, it was very touching and romantic

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Khairul Ahsan 08 April 2020

Appreciate your kind words, @Beach Girl. Thank you.

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Geetha Jayakumar 12 October 2014

A fantastic poem with beautiful lines........ But alas! Despite all these, you didn't smile. So the clouds precipitated, the baby resumed Its fits of cries, the thunders roared and the Lightnings flashed, and the moon ball eclipsed. Loved the way you presented it. Thanks for sharing.

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Khairul Ahsan 08 April 2020

Thanks for quoting lines from my poem.Your appreciation is always an inspiration, @Geetha Jayakumar!

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Anupa Subramanian 12 October 2014

Beautiful..pure words and sentiments

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Khairul Ahsan 05 April 2020

Appreciate your kind words, dear poet Anupa Subramanian.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 October 2014

Smiling Poem is very beautiful.Keep on writing.

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Khairul Ahsan 05 April 2020

Thank you for the inspiration, dear poet Kumarmani Mahakul.

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