Become My Thirst Poem by Anthony Dalby

Become My Thirst

Rating: 5.0


This longing
is as fine as porcelain
irridescent in the morning light.

Lover,
press it to your soft lips
and taste the nectar.
Become my thirst.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Don Mcwilliams 13 March 2008

Anthony, This is lyrically elegant, a spot-on description of desire. Don

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Hayley Lewis 14 June 2007

Never have so few words touched me in the way this poem did. Hay

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Patricia Gale 22 February 2006

Romantic. love the line become my thirst. Love Patricia

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Fox Nekitsune 28 November 2005

My thirst is quenched, I hope you find yours.

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