Becoming One Poem by Sarah Persson

Becoming One

Rating: 4.7


As you lay here beside me
I can see beyond your smile
Your heart, the normal charm you have
Is lost here for a while,

I touch your face
Trace your lips with my eyes
The dark handsome ruggedness
Fills my sighs,
Touch my lips to your forehead
To help ease the pain
Desire fills my entire
And it's hard to refrain,

But be it for one night
Or be it for days
I'll be here forever
To indulge in this haze,
Like the song of the humming bird
Our souls hold one tune
The rhythm lifts our spirits
Like the scent of fine perfume.

Trace thoughts through our touch
Through our touch, trace our thoughts
Becoming one in entirety
Feel the pulse of our warmth.

Friday, May 13, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 06 February 2017

A very nice poem about love. Congrats on having it chosen as poem of the day!

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Edmund Strolis 14 May 2016

An intimate window into a time and place where time falls away.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 06 February 2017

Lovely poem.... congrats on being selected....

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Bernard F. Asuncion 27 August 2018

Sarah, such a pretty poem...10++++

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Fabrizio Frosini 10 February 2017

well done, Sarah! I'm late.. but here I am.. ;)

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Dev Anand 15 November 2018

Like the song of the humming bird Our souls hold one tune The rhythm lifts our spirits Like the scent of fine perfume. wonderful poetic sense. becoming one is heavenly.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 June 2018

A delicate romantic poem so beautifully penned! Liked the lucidity of poetic expression! 10

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Akhtar Jawad 10 June 2018

Touches of love so nicely penned that it becomes a touching poem.

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Britte Ninad 22 May 2018

feel a good love- heart touching

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Affiah Odhiambo 22 March 2018

Beautifully expressed. 'Through our touch trace our thoughts' 10+

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Sarah Persson

Sarah Persson

Wellington, Shropshire
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