Beefriend With The Butterfly. Poem by Nathan Tablang

Beefriend With The Butterfly.

Rating: 4.5


Bee, who's rococo as a sunflower's
petal as it stand on it's norm
Butterfly, who's tantalizing
in every side and form

Bee, who's color is bi-chrome
but may still define as pulchritudinous.
Butterfly, who's chromatic but may
provoke dangers even this may sound platitudinous

Bee, although alluring as it seems,
but one unreasonable move could lead to unsustainable
amount of torment
Butterfly, who's fascinating than it should be,
but it may be an agent of everybody's consent

Bee, who's loyalty is
incomparable to others.
Butterfly, in the beginning that is
commendable but in the end the one who suffers.

Sunday, November 15, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: insects
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 22 November 2015

Lovely train of thought, well articulated and nicely penned in poetic diction with good rhyme scheme. A good juxtaposition of both insects with insightful comparison made. Thanks for sharing Nathan. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kelly Kurt 15 November 2015

A bee autiful poem, Nathan. Thanks

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Manonton Dalan 15 November 2015

I love butterflies.. I once collected cocoons to wait to metamorphose for science project.

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