What's not done in the morning
Will have to be done at night
Wasted opportunities
Usually strike back and bite
Your summer you have squandered
Youth forever blown away
Raw rabid reality
Winter is not far away
Maximize every moment
Do your very best each day
You are a born champion
The price you're willing to pay
Your fight might almost be lost
The battle must still be won
Winter is almost over now, but the thoughts of it impending at the end of last summer spurred these thoughts in me as well.
We need to have faith in ourselves mostly when times are tough.. Shelley said it well, 'If Winter comes, can Spring be far behind? ' I really loved your sonnet.. Your poems are wonderful and full of positivity, , .. Thank you for sharing and being an optimist in this world of hopelessness and pessimism..
The positivity in this poem is infectious. That's the magic of words, they can change n transform. Even a pessimist would find solace n hope in these words and would enjoy the beauty of faith n belief. Winter as a symbol of raw rabid reality is spot on. Great work.
I like this image that you try to give us through this great poem.'The battle must still be won ' Life is all of the steps that we must to win. Thank you for sharing.
A wonderful well executed write full of positivity. Very inspiring lines that act as guidance towards a tough season. Another brilliant write.10
You are a born champion The price you're willing to pay, excellenlty penned, thanks for sharing
Wasting the precious time allotted to us is a crime as well as an unpardonable mistake! As the seasons will go in rapid succession, our childhood and youth will quickly give way to the infirmity of old age! At that stage even if we are resolved to set things right, we may not be able to do anything. So make the maximum of the opportunities that come our way and utilize the time sanctioned to us!
Your fight might almost be lost The battle must still be won - - - - -] Exactly so and succinctly put. Words of wisdom should always be so.10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Time should not be wasted but to use time to explore all our dreams and to to make them come true, to try is to bring new opportunities into our lives and to fulfill our desires! Great write!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
An inspirational poem, time flashes by quickly