Beginning Battle Poem by Billy Loving

Beginning Battle

Rating: 5.0


Sound of a gun
As I lie there in the sun
Taking cover before damage done
Battle just begun

All happening so fast
As I hear a deafening blast
Shadows they cast
Planes moving past

Behind the bank I stay
As the bombs lead the way
Smoke filled sky turning gray
For an end, I silently pray

Wednesday, January 18, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: war
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mj Lemon 18 January 2017

Brilliant! How one interprets that last line determines how dark the meaning of this verse becomes. Again, brilliant.

1 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success