Beginning Of One Of My Poems Poem by sam, corrupt S, finley

Beginning Of One Of My Poems

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you know i couldn't be more sorry
but right now your probably angry
i just wish i could make you feel better
though inside of me i couldn't be deader
if you stop talking to me
then i will no longer be
of this world i am among
if you stop i will be hung
hanging looking down with me lifeless eyes
and it's all because you didn't hear my cries
i asked so but you still didn't talk to me
it's all your fault that now i hang so sadly
when you said that i almost cried
felt so bad and from you i was denied
please I'd do anything to make it right
look if you don't then i won't be alright
hurting so much i want to die
i can't take this you know why?
i have to be with you or i will just be hurt
just talk to me i can surely make it work
I'm really sorry but and that's it
but for you i would take a hit
you gotta tell me its all right and that its ok
but if if you want me gone then i will go away
baby you have me on a string
and i simply can't do anything

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sara Here 15 May 2006

well expressed well formed and well arranged

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