Being Myself. Poem by Fay Slimm

Being Myself.

Rating: 5.0


Being created by Love
To love life,
I grow daily
To love being myself.
Not ashamed
Of this fact, I no longer strive
To be some passionless
Grey soul, with helpless
Needs. - I feed on life.
Am 'passion revived'.
Wild joy overtakes me
At times, - elates me.
Pulsating energy
Helps me survive.
Infuses delight.
Transports me freely
To find, at the least excuse
A broad smile.
I know passion should
Never be joyless.
Passively giving in
Is defiling
To the 'me' that is myself now.
Quite buoyant
Am I, yet subtlely quiet
Inside, - cloaked
In commitment to love.
Heartbeat submitting
To nothing but pleasure
In giving, I now
Celebrate me, willingly.
Recycled maybe - - but
I like the new 'me'.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ency Bearis 18 June 2009

a nice rejuvenated feeling and expressed well....wonderful verses....10

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Catrina Heart 18 June 2009

Revitalizing the inner self, invigorating through the outer personality...10+++

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Sue Sie 18 June 2009

Fay...You sound very happy with your new 'me'....and you sound like a lovely lady, your poem is lovely too...10++ Sue

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Anthony Williams 18 June 2009

'Recycled maybe-but; i like the new me' my favorite part of the poem, Good Poem.

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Bob Gibson 18 June 2009

you have always been you! finding yourself! is something new no deadlines to meet, live for today there's peace and love in your heart! Fay

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Meggie Gultiano 02 July 2009

I like the new 'me'. I love this line..very positive And i love the flow of your words..So gentle.. Hugs, Meggie

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Smiley Hooker 28 June 2009

You must be as God created you, Fay - special in His eyes - so there's no need to change. well expressed thoughts, I love it! : -)

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yeah grey souls are so sore! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Juneil Sechico 25 June 2009

heha! well expressed Fay....Very natural but the message us well shouted! It's nice to be you huh...! it's an art of simplicity indeed! two thumbs up for this loving lady!

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butiful.. fay.. many a poet.. need this.. thanks

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