Heather Burns


Being With You - Poem by Heather Burns

Being with you for just
awhile
Shadows vanish with your
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Comments about Being With You by Heather Burns

  • Freshman - 882 Points Dorothy- A. Holmes (4/21/2015 11:40:00 AM)

    How lovely Heather! A most enjoyable read!
    Dorothy
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  • Freshman - 882 Points Dorothy- A. Holmes (4/21/2015 10:59:00 AM)

    The heart cannot be silent!
    Dorothy
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  • Gold Star - 34,129 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/6/2015 12:06:00 AM)

    Being with you means
    much to me.... nice and intimate feeling (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 16 Points John Hardesty (4/1/2015 6:09:00 PM)

    I prefer more words, yet interesting piece! Love is filled in this one, for sure! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,556 Points Amitava Sur (3/18/2015 12:54:00 AM)

    A calm and soothing romantic poem about sweet love with a feeling of togetherness .... very nice (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 67 Points Fiona Kalu (11/15/2014 1:54:00 PM)

    Very romantic indeed! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Hayley Northbridge (11/14/2014 10:20:00 PM)

    I liked this very much. Says everything doesn't it. They is such special talent in being concise. Awesome: D (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 8,437 Points Michael Mcparland (11/2/2014 5:06:00 AM)

    I loved this poem. An awesome expression of love. A 10. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,092 Points Shabeeh Haider (11/1/2014 7:15:00 AM)

    A sweet and romantic poem. Please send your feedback about my poems (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 578 Points Dimitri Jagodinski (10/27/2014 5:23:00 PM)

    Nice simple love poem. Well done. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,131 Points Hebert Logerie Sr. (10/25/2014 12:37:00 AM)

    Love is sometimes short, brief, simple, and naïve. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,107 Points Geetha Jayakumar (10/23/2014 2:16:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem on love, flowing freely like sweet breeze in rhymes..fantastic lines..

    Like the calming of the
    sea
    Being with you means
    much to me.

    Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing with us. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,908 Points Soulful Heart (10/22/2014 11:28:00 AM)

    short and sweet.....epitomized the blissful feeling of love....elixir of existence... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 31,578 Points Gajanan Mishra (10/21/2014 7:44:00 AM)

    being with you much to me, pure love. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,059 Points Kumarmani Mahakul (10/18/2014 8:56:00 AM)

    A lovely poem to realize about God's love and affection for creatures. Everywhere love blossoms like flower by his grace. Like the calming of sea only his mercy can make us calm and shadows vanish with smile. Excellent. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 34 Points Kate Smith (10/17/2014 4:15:00 PM)

    looooooovvvvvveeeeeeeeeeeeeeee (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,890 Points Patricia Grantham (10/14/2014 5:58:00 AM)

    Love is definitely in the air. Your poem permeates with it.
    Simple but oh so sweet Heather. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 249 Points Mysia Hayling (10/3/2014 3:10:00 PM)

    Very nice and soothing poem, I like it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 53 Points Mercy Ferriols (9/22/2014 9:25:00 PM)

    so in love...love it! thank you for sharing :) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 18,117 Points Roseann Shawiak (9/10/2014 10:48:00 PM)

    Heather, I like how you weren't afraid to repeat the word love over and over like the waves of the ocean hitting the shore time after time. It drives home the love you have for someone. Reading it actually calms the soul, like listening to the waves methodically falling upon the sad. Great poem, I like it. Thank you, RoseAnn (Report) Reply










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