Believe, Hope And Dream Poem by Fasika Ayalew

Believe, Hope And Dream

Rating: 5.0


I invested in time so you can talk
I invested in hope so you can dream
I invested in dream so you can believe
I invested my words so you can vision
To see beyond what is seen
Believe despite the rain
Hope despite the fog
Dream despite the nightmare
To take a chance despite the fear
I believed, I hoped, I talked
I envision… I invested in time
To dream so that you can

I believed, I hoped, I talked
I envision… I invested in time
In my mind’s track so I let you run

Feel your legs is it not tired?
Feel its muscles, is there no cramp?
Feel your heart is not beating fast
You’ve been running through my mind

Believe, hope and dream
So I will be a winner,
Vision, hope and dare,
So I can have many folds return

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naseer Ahmed Nasir 26 November 2008

Believe, hope, dream and vision...Good and timely investment in time...you will have many folds return...A beautiful poem indeed....10/10.

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Nathaniel Booker 01 September 2008

I really enjoyed this piece, Fasika, I am always drawn to pieces that inspire and this one is nothing short of remarkable. I would suggest changing the word 'vision' in 'I vision' and one other place to 'I envision' (just a suggestion) . Regardless, this piece is powerful and renewing of heart. **10** N8 (Nate)

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