abhimanyu kumar.s

Rookie - 56 Points (31.12.1988 / venkatgiri kota)

Beloved King


Good morning masses
News for all classes
Wheat prices are rised
Household products are hiked
Birth rate has increased
Am happy to convey to you
Your death is very near.

Good afternoon masses
News for all classes
Our weapons have increased
Our military forces ready
I will protect your family
Get a win for me
Your death and my growth please.

Good night masses
News for all classes
We are good at technology
All are developed
High growth in slums
Heavy taxation and debts
2G's and 3G's my partners
I want to lead from front.

I assure your health and sanitation
I will always be loyal in exploiting you
Don't protest over me please
Am damn good in killing
You all belong to me
Democracy is in my dictatorship
Good night sweet dreams humma
May your soul rest in peace.

Submitted: Tuesday, October 04, 2011
Edited: Tuesday, October 04, 2011

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  • Rookie Xzavavia X (6/29/2012 1:34:00 AM)

    Only in the King of Kings, Jesus Christ, do I find hope amidst this chaotic world... Another thought provoking piece. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Juan Guzman (6/22/2012 10:29:00 AM)

    This is pure sarcasm and the poem is filled with anger. I am not saying that those are bad things but...there is no other feeling in the poem and it is not enjoyable to read. The word choice is very interesting though and the beggining to each section is very well togethor. This is a rather hard poem to comment on, so i appolagize for the fact that i am not giving much advice on how to improve. In the end I don't like this poem but that does not make it a bad poem, if i had to rate it it be a 8.1/ 10. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,920 Points Hans Vr (10/4/2011 5:24:00 AM)

    Well written piece of poetry. The criticism is put in a cynical but still pleasant way. (Report) Reply

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