Beneath The Lamp.... Poem by kafil uddin raihan.

Beneath The Lamp....

Rating: 5.0


Certain things, we can see,
Certain things, we can never,
In between there are something else,
That we can see but we don't,
We need to find out those,
We can't avoid these,
Black chapters of our life,
We need to be special,
In our thoughts and deeds,
We need to be individual,
We should evaluate us,
For this we should fix those out,
Lets figure out the open secrets,
Those are hidden surround us,
Beneath the enlightened lamp.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Obinna Eruchie 09 August 2009

Beneath us, the light to enlighten us. Interesting lines.

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Ravi A 09 August 2009

We can improve only when our ordinary lamp becomes an enlightened lamp. Good. What is enlightenment? Seeing the same situation from a higher level of perception. It will certainly offer a better solution.

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~ Jon London ~ 09 August 2009

Very well written Kafil....really enjoyed this enlighting piece...well done 10

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Ency Bearis 10 August 2009

a good metaphor...well implied poem...great poem....

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Carol Gall 10 August 2009

a great write kafil 10

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Frank Lambert 16 August 2009

Kafil, I'm searching for this lamp, but I haven't found it yet. It hasn't stopped me searching though... Frank

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Samah Hamza 14 August 2009

lovely poem.....the idea is harder said than done though well we can only try our best....right?

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Marton Dezso 11 August 2009

and give me that lamp.

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Marton Dezso 11 August 2009

A strange poem, though lovely. So linear, not like Kafil's other children. Wise words, wise indeed. Can you do it? no. Can we? no. In deeds we should improve not in words. no more 10++

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Yelena M. 11 August 2009

A beautiful poem and an idea you put into it..Thanks for sharing :) A.

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