Beneath Your Feet Poem by David Harris

Beneath Your Feet

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Everyday we go outside,
to enjoy the world out there,
but we never think about,
the world beneath our feet.
It maybe tiny and microscopic,
with creatures that make some shiver.
This world is in a way
similar to the one we live in.
There are dramas there
as each creature struggles to survive.
So the next time you go
out into the garden,
stop for a moment and wonder,
at all the dramas being played out there.
The dramas of life and death,
that is just beneath your feet.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Meggie Gultiano 03 October 2007

this is beautifully and sincerely written, DAvid..you are an observant of little things and details..thsnks, David, for sharing your thoughts to us.. hugs, Meggie

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x... x... 29 September 2007

A beautiful write young man....Believe me some of us are reminded every day of the 'compost heap' beneath our feet....where once there was peace and feeling wanted is despair...Pain at seeing that all see the good beneath many others feet. not just one but many. The world is ours to make of it and our lives what we wish...sometimes thought, fate steps in, and we stumble with pain...At those times I guess your words in this poem are needed...Now, if only you could instill love in the hearts of so many that have frozen....god bless, marci.

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 29 September 2007

I have heard of the world beneath my wings, never thought of the world beneath my feet, has disney done a song yet... Sorry mate forgive my light hearted fun...10 for you to make up will that do... David

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