hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 34,455 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Best In Self - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

It appeared rare
As if not permitted to stare
What a magnificent show to present
I just made sincere attempt

The whole of sky has been illuminated
All stars are quite and resonated
There appears no noise
All calm with no choice

She is at her full glow
I certainly can not allow
The moments to pass
With no expression for class

She deserves to be called
One of the best to exalt
Perfectly beautiful with no spot
My attention is certainly caught

Wind reminded me with gentle blow
Here is queen that smilingly grows
No one is to be compared with beauty
She is lovely creature presented by an almighty

I would wish to hold
And show openly to the world
Here stands one lovely and fine human
Best in self as praised woman


Comments about Best In Self by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 34,455 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/21/2014 6:59:00 AM)

    A poem full of wonderful imagery which is both upbuilding and very well crafted. Thank you for sharing this thought on beauty my friend.
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  • Gold Star - 34,455 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/16/2014 9:10:00 AM)

    welcome bu mugda and jairam ji
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  • Gold Star - 34,455 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/16/2014 7:45:00 AM)

    nice wish

    Jawahar Gupta11 minutes ago
    all praise the lord, , , (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 34,455 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/16/2014 6:58:00 AM)

    Nur Meiyati likes this.

    Nur Meiyati Oh, you adore 'her' so much....
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  • Gold Star - 34,455 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/16/2014 6:43:00 AM)

    It appeared rare
    As if not permitted to stare (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, February 16, 2014



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