Best Of Friends Poem by Matt Burgett

Best Of Friends

Rating: 3.5


I remember now with a look back in time
A look at the friendship we used to have
It was so happy shiny and good
Then suddenly it went from good to bad

Because of me and what I caused
That friendship slipped and dwindled
Now I stop open my eyes and pause
Perhaps now can the friendship be rekindled?

An extra help and an extra push
I need just to get through anymore
No smiles just tears are all I have
I'm nothing of what I was before

I've slipped away into depression
I do not like it not a bit
But with a friend to reverse recession
Perhaps I can clime out of it

So what do you think what do you say
Will you once perhaps again
Grab on to my hand and give a lift today
And be with me the best of friends

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 19 February 2009

This is a solid write. The rhymes and rhythm are not the best but could have been a lot worse. This was a difficult thing to write so credit must be given for the effort alone. The meaning was clear and that is half the battle. No need for interpretation. I like it that way. GW62

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Crystal Torres 05 February 2009

omfg i know im a girl but i loved it it has so much...emotion... u know i really enjoyed reading this i gave it a 10 no doubt but um who was this for? its just so great

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