Betrayal Poem by Alc Harris
Betrayal
Rating: ★5.0
Betrayal...
Sticks in the throat,
till death to choke.
After the knives
comes the ache
sad farewell
to what once was.
Wednesday, November 2, 2005
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Charles Chaim Wax
02 November 2005
the mystery of pain need to grap it before it grabs us nice work!
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4/22/2024 2:48:03 PM # 1.0.0.1119
the last two lines killed the flow of this piece, which was pretty alright until that point. this short of a poem would definitly benefit from a ryhme scheme of some sort. re-write it again with ryhme and skill and maybe you could have a poem.