Betrayal Poem by katie shaw

Betrayal

Rating: 4.9


I thought they were there for you.
They're the ones that are supossed to help at the lowest times
They don't
They're the ones bringing you down
You don't reconize it ' cause it's hard to
You drift farther and farther into thier trap
Then SNAP!
The claws close on you
Your heart is crushed
You were betrayed
They call themselves 'friends'
That's what they want you to believe
Well don't believe it
Don't trust anyone
You may be able to for a little while but know that it's not real
They'll suck you in
You'll fall for it without a doubt
Im warning you now
It's just betrayal

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mel Vincent Basconcillo 08 April 2009

I can relate to this one as well truthful and from the heart

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Christian Guice 06 March 2009

i know how it is of betrayal great poem

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Brandon w 06 March 2009

i like this it has a lot of truth to it.

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Clynesha Cobb 06 March 2009

I AGREE WITH YU! ! HE WHO LIES TO HIS FRENS LOSE HIS TEETH AND HE WHO BETRAY PEOPLE LOSE HIS HEAD! !

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