Better To Paddle Down Stream Poem by David Darbyshire

Better To Paddle Down Stream

Rating: 3.3


Looking for things in the dark
Swimming against the flow
Fire won’t flame without a spark
Do little red men mean go?

Break the rules you will get fined
People often go to the extreme
Turn the lights on and you will find
Better to paddle down stream

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chuck Audette 12 March 2008

Odd mix of imagery, but I like it. -chuck

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