Treasure Island

Alice Vedral Rivera

(Chicago, Illinois, USA)

*Between the Lines (social commentary)


Cages - white blind
Folded windows
Filter fall pages
Rainy drizzle
Taps on the panes

Out of focus
Distorted view
Of life passing
By as seen from
The inside out

This is our now
We're living our
Love through slatted
Blinds and reading
Between the lines


© Alice Vedral Rivera - 2009

Submitted: Monday, November 02, 2009
Edited: Monday, June 30, 2014

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*Part of my book, 'Shadows on the Carpet I' - 'Visions' section

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