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Between the Now and Then

Upon horizon, night to day ~
there between the now and then,
I often pause along the way,
to tiptoe through the moonlit glen ~
or perhaps take in sun's light,
night to day ~ day to night.

Upon horizon, day to day ~
there between the then and now,
as seasons grow along the way,
to crease the face of timely brow ~
or perhaps steal time away,
day to day ~ day to day.

Upon horizon, day to night ~
there between the now and then,
I stand beneath my autumn light,
bereft as memory calls again ~
to pain the heart with bygone sight,
Night to day ~ day to night.

Upon horizon, night to night ~
there between the then and now,
I know that winter casts its sight,
on one last leaf that will not bow ~
to frost within its golden sight,
night to night ~ night to night.

Upon horizon, night to day ~
there between the now and then,
I know my spring will fade away,
and summer's soft remember when
will echo gently autumn's way ~
day to night ~ night to day....
Winter's near ~ Winter's near......

Submitted: Thursday, April 19, 2007
Edited: Tuesday, February 15, 2011


Comments about this poem (Between the Now and Then by Hazelmarie Elliott )

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  • Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (4/22/2009 6:43:00 AM)

    I too was recommended to your site by James Early and I am glad he did. Your poetry has not only beautiful imagery, but within a structure that echoes the title and theme over and over again.
    I truly love being introduced to writers like yourself who write with substance and style. Top marks from me. Karin Anderson

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  • Dawn Slanker (7/8/2008 11:26:00 AM)

    Ms. Elliott,
    Mr. Earley was so right in that he told me I would enjoy this poem.
    I absolutely love the elegant structure, soothing content and beautiful imagery. I don't know what else to say other than you have an amazing talent and I can't wait to read more.
    Dawn

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  • Helen C Capan (4/7/2008 10:22:00 PM)

    Perhaps it is because I too feel winter is just beyond the summer's glow, I don't know, but I really could understand this piece. It puts me in mind of Robert Frost's old house analogy. I love it! I'm impressed with the work you do.

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  • James B. Earley (3/11/2008 6:23:00 AM)

    This is indeed a poignant reflection! I must say that this work is an exceptional effort. Looking forward to reading more. Thanks for the moment!

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