Between Two Worlds Poem by Mark Hopwood

Between Two Worlds

Rating: 5.0


All is quiet, all is still
I sit in my room alone
The wind blows outside, cans roll down the road
But I'm nice and warm in my home
Warm and dry, in a comfortable bed
Time goes by very slow
Lonely, bored, depressed and confused
Stuck in with nowhere to go.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 15 July 2011

Nice poem composed with vivid imagery. I liked the theme very much. Kudos to your skill. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... I shall be highly obliged if you please read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1. Warmest regards Akmal

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