Captain Cur

Rookie - 340 Points (England)

Bewitching Battle On Curdi, Pirate Adventures (16) - Poem by Captain Cur

Completely reckless, I charged forward
advancing quickly toward her retreating form.
I gazed in concave eyes, her left arm stirred
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Comments about Bewitching Battle On Curdi, Pirate Adventures (16) by Captain Cur

  • Rookie - 4 Points Nader Baheri (4/7/2013 8:22:00 AM)

    she might have been defeated jusy with a simple smile~nb (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 3,735 Points Diane Hine (3/31/2013 10:31:00 PM)

    Action sequences are devilishly difficult to write I think, but this poem is skillfully executed.
    Concave eyes sounds nasty! (Report) Reply








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