Beyond A Fake Smile Poem by merna ibrahim

Beyond A Fake Smile

Rating: 4.9


Everyone is drawing a fake smile.
It seems hard, just like walking a mile.
I'm sad because we are all sad.
This is so bad and it's making me mad.

I want to see happiness and joviality.
I want to enjoy peace and tranquility.
Minds and Hearts! get rid of the pain
Don't be affected by this grief gloomy rain.

I don't want to see those hot tears.
Defeat your weak points and your fears.
I don't want to see those sad red cheeks anymore.
Leave the sea of sorrow-go to the happy shore.

O God, we need your mercy and help.
Help me to cease the cry and stop this yelp.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mrs.Joseph =) 02 December 2010

A very good poem! Honest and compassionate :) the best poem ive read in a while! keep up the good work :)

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Sally Plumb Plumb 21 November 2018

I know how you feel. Your piece reminds me of something I wrote.It’s called The Slow Walk.

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Mrs.Joseph =) 02 December 2010

A very good poem! Honest and compassionate :) the best poem ive read in a while! keep up the good work :)

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Mrs.Joseph =) 02 December 2010

A very good poem! Honest and compassionate :) the best poem ive read in a while! keep up the good work :)

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Reem Ehab 07 November 2010

What can I say? ! beautiful Merna =) ...I love your simple way in writing and expressing. Everyone can read, understand and love it. Everyday you prove that you're better than the day before.Great job Merna!

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Blue Eyes 03 November 2010

i love all your poems, but this one is deeper than the others concerning meaning...thanks

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