Big Loaf Of Love Poem by Vishal Sharma

Big Loaf Of Love

Rating: 5.0


Separation
painfull
for both of us
remain together
not in fate
thus i hate
my destiny
my fortune
my biggest enemy
with many
broke me
totally
peacefully
painfully
though
hungry am i
god has snatched
a big loaf of love
from my mouth

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 18 May 2013

Love this poem full of heartache but fate knows seperation is the only way forward! Great title!

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Ambrosia A 17 May 2013

Lovely write. God, who has given us this love, may snatch and can bestow with a better one as well. So keep moving......

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