Big Willie's Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

Big Willie's

Rating: 4.5


He thought they loved,
As raindrops fell
With fresh laid scents.

He thought they loved,
Ever since they met
And held eyes in intense suspense.

He thought they loved...
When climax came
To leave them full
And dispensed of come secretions!

And he watched their sighing...
Build into hot sounds that wailed!
Only then did he believe,
It was just not him who could please her.

And he left his peeking to sneak a seat,
At Big Willie's Bar!
To drink and curse himself,
For letting his one true love go!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pia Andersson 11 February 2007

'When you think that you lost everything You find out you can always lose a little more' Bob Dylan Your poem reminds me of that song by Dylan Reality can be so cruel Wishing you a joyful evening Pia

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Alison Smith 10 February 2007

Loved the ending the best.... Alison

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