Bipolar Poem by Chris Newlash

Bipolar

Rating: 5.0


I'm sane, I'm insane,
I'm extra, I'm plain,
I'm this, I'm that,
I'm skinny, I'm fat,
I'm happy, I'm mad,
I'm relaxed, I'm sad,
I'm black, I'm white,
I'm wrong, I'm right,
I'm circle, I'm square,
I care, I don't care,
I'm real, I'm fake,
I'm great, I'm a mistake,
I'm smart, I'm dumb,
I'm boring, I'm fun,
I'm lunar, I'm solar,
I'm Chris.......I'm bipolar.....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stephen Stirk 27 June 2009

A good write which I enjoyed. A difficult subject made light and frothy. I thought at the end you were going to say I'm Kerry McFadden.....but it didn't rhyme. Best Steve

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LOVEFOOL Aka 27 June 2009

Nice fast flowing write with a message 10++

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Emily Oldham 27 June 2009

I like it. Nice rhythm nice message. Fun to read. :)

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The Poet Laureates 27 June 2009

i think you should switch 'boring' and 'smart' that would make it perfect besides that i like it great rhythm like another poet said great job

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Tyease Collins 27 June 2009

Heh i actually like this poem. I feel all those emotions lol i love the bouncy flow of it =] awesome poem -Tyease

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Kate Frost 19 June 2010

This is great. i love reading your poems chris. :)

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Brooke Boulanger 28 June 2009

i really like this, it's clear and confusing at the same time, has great rythme, and describes the feeling very well

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loki thredbald 28 June 2009

i really liked it. it has a great rhythem. nice write

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Fay Slimm 28 June 2009

You have given thought to the wording in this verse Chris.. and I like the flow of it - well done and keep writing....10/10 from Fay

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Alex Gomez 27 June 2009

Although bipolarity is an infinitely interesting topic to write a poem about, your execution of it was rather cliche. Your comparisons need to be a bit more original.

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