Bipolar Relationship Poem by Dev Robinson

Bipolar Relationship

Rating: 3.9


We love...We hate
We laugh...I cry
We hug...we push
I throw things when I'm angry... Hecleans it up
I tell him to leave..He comes back inside
I wish that he would go...But I want him to stay
He yells...But then says 'I'm sorry'
He wants to go...But isn't going anywhere
We threaten one another...Then go back on our word
It's an emotional rollercoaster...When will it end?

Friday, October 23, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: relationship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 October 2009

We threaten one another...Then go back on our word It's an emotional rollercoaster...When will it end? .ao lonf you love and hate each other or come alwyas with novelidea of meeting each time with new love..it will go on and it is good tohve both kind of feelings for each other..i liked ur idea der...nice presentation....10 read mine..come hoime..home bound...no separate ways... anywhere..butterflies around....n.......mary ro marry

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Beautiful, " I wish that he would go...But I want him to stay "… loved it, loved it and I loved, dear.

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Danny H 10 November 2009

bipolar relationships. i just hope its not to bad, as my mother. just make sure you take the right amount of medication as prescibed or youll be messed up like my mom and mess up everyone around here. Be careful ok i hope verything works out

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Kay Connolly 10 November 2009

ah, so I can see why we can see eye to eye when it comes to poetry, we've had the same inspiration. (i'm glad we both found a positive way to deal with the emotions that come from a bipolar relationship; })

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Monica Rose 04 November 2009

I really like this. I kind of shows a struggle between the two, and is very emotional. Well done.

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Anthony Welles 27 October 2009

nice piece, can definitely relate to that with out a doubt

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