Bipoler , Seat Belts Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

Bipoler , Seat Belts

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ONCE again im walking into a storm,
we have our coats on, and in our
empty dirty hands, tiny white pills.
ONCE again i craw into this bathroom,
and find stink, and a shadow with a
smile, or a saint with a knife.
MY eyes, abandone this light,
my body, snaps to attention,
my mind, waltzes into this bipoler
mode, and just like that, , i fly.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

DAVID...GOOD USE OF IMAGERY...GRAPHIC, BUT IN A TASTEFULL VEIN(10) ! ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''~F. J. R.~'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''

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Duncan Wyllie 08 May 2006

A sad condition that takes up too much of life, a profound write here David, though heart-breaking, love Duncan

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