Birds Poem by Sandra Martyres

Birds

Rating: 5.0


Soaring high
Birds of the sky
You know your way
Across continents
No maps
No compasses
Just the seasons
To guide you directly
To warmer climes

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ahmad Shiddiqi 09 May 2009

very illuminative and imaginative! inviting and inspiring! like Stravinsky Firebird on words!

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Subroto Chatterjee 10 May 2009

Very intelligent bird...very intelligent writer...Ahhh..a bird that can guide us? Absolutely! And its true....Fly robin, fly! ! I like it... Cheers. Subroto

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 11 May 2009

Soaring high in life one knows which is the better climes well said

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Fiona Davidson 11 May 2009

Wonderful poem Sandra...like the birds it soars....Fi 10+++

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Alf Hutchison 11 May 2009

A few choice words say it all so eloquently... very well done... Alf

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Sandra Fowler 28 December 2009

How lovely. When I write, in my mind, I am soaring with those birds. You have captured the essence of poetic freedom in this one, dear Sandra. Love, Sandra

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Patti Masterman 18 August 2009

It's interesting how as we grow older; grow up, things which never seemed to be a big deal (we were used to them, sort of took them for granted, seeing them constantly) are suddenly realized to be such miracles. It's just that we grew immune to their magic and mystery from long association. Perhaps if we went into a long coma, then woke up and saw the world again..everything would seem like a magic show, a trick of the living god, a miracle performed solely for us.

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Saadat Tahir 07 July 2009

a great truism and yearly event of magnitude done in such few lines and very well at that cheers

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rago rago 05 July 2009

amazing write........ let the birds fly liketh the imaginations in you too fly over the sky.........

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Indira Renganathan 25 June 2009

Such is nature's gift, nature's way...Godly....short and sweet...thanks Sandra for all your comments

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