(London)

What do you think this poem is about?

Birth

You can never lose that part of you

Our hearts were beating as one

You nourished me made a home for me

When I gazed upon you I cried

For a moment I needed to return inside

Bringing comfort

So much to teach

Longing for speech

You make me stand tall even when I fall

Our lives together

Eternal connection

That cannot be broken even in separation

Not just for set backs

You are my inspiration

Through my creation

Though I fail often to show it

You are my devotion

Submitted: Sunday, March 07, 2010
Edited: Tuesday, July 19, 2011

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  • Vipins Puthooran (10/1/2011 4:06:00 AM)

    Devoted expression and heartfelt thoughts...
    (Our lives together,
    Eternal connection) ....really great...
    Excellent poem...

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  • Allemagne Roßmann (9/18/2011 1:33:00 AM)

    Birth of an aspiring great poet here

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  • Rekha Mandagere (7/19/2011 2:46:00 AM)

    Great tribute to all mothers! Your expression is very humble and catches every reader. Nice poem. I love the sweetness of this poem.

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  • Dave Dafes (3/8/2011 4:55:00 AM)

    This is a true expressing of a devotion to a mother and a tribute to all mothers..What could we have done without them? And forever our hearts will eternally be in harmony

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  • Naida Nepascua Supnet (3/5/2011 7:30:00 AM)

    the ever amazing feeling is when a mom sees her child for the first time.

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  • Shalini Samuel (10/18/2010 12:08:00 PM)

    Birth recalled once again.... Mother is really the greatest of Gods creation... Everyone love's their mother...

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  • Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (9/22/2010 11:11:00 AM)

    ‘You are my devotion’ ~ Yeah agree Mother ~ Mother ~ Mother noting can fill the blanks

    Without Mother everything is blank and bland…great tribute to Mother… thanks for sharing Hon'ble Poet Louis
    Regards
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
    10/10

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  • Sally Plumb Plumb (3/9/2010 7:04:00 AM)

    A good mothers day piece.

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  • Booklover Tv Lounger (3/7/2010 3:48:00 PM)

    Lovely. Words that speak volumes of the bonds between parent and child. Great work and keep it up: D
    -SJD

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