Birthday Rose Poem by Aqeb Benazir Ibn Minar

Birthday Rose

Rating: 5.0


Introduction: A mother is such a wonderful poetry...She is the compass and blessing for her children and no matter what, in our hearts - she's the rose that never dies.


The moment I first opened my eyes,
I saw your glowing face in shine
You took me in your graceful arms,
And poured my life in peaceful charm
You sacrificed more than I can count,
To raise me and strengthen my ground
Every time you heard me scream,
You took off from your every meal
You fulfilled all my needs and dreams,
You mean the world and more to me

A teacher, a playmate,
An answer, a guide of fate
You reach out and pull me back,
Whenever I get lost off track
You love me like no other,
Words just simply can’t explain, you are the best mother
With you I never pretend, by your values I transcend
You help me get my courage tight,
You aid me to my wisdom right
You are my loving mother,

Someone I have to share my thoughts
Always you know, always you care,
Always you feel, always you heal
Your tender smile lights up my life,
From doubts that keep me captive at night
Forever in my heart, you reside
You care so much and feel so deep,
You’re just everything I need
I’m above grateful to have you in my life,
As every time I think of you, I always feel revived.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cristina Teodor 05 October 2011

Outstanding, sublime, beautiful words merging with heart of readers. A tribute to the most loved woman on earth, a mother, showing her worth in such greatful manner.The poem is ending so nice 'i'm above greatful to have you in my life, /As every time i think of you, i always feel revived.'.Wonderful poem..Cristina Teodor

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Jacqui Broad 13 October 2011

Breathtakingly beautifully written. Your mother brought you up very well, if you can write such poetry in her honor.

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Kaila George 19 October 2011

That is beautiful...yes mothers are our first contact when born, smiles...beautifuly written...reminds me of my mum.

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Anhelica Velasquez 11 November 2011

thats a sweet poem :)

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Heather Wilkins 25 May 2013

the first love we know is mother. The last love we know is mother. beautiful tribute to her.

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Noor Othman 10 March 2013

salam I like your Birthday Rose poem - well done! Noor Othman

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Alfa K. A 18 November 2011

... from the deep heart... if not we have a mother we wont know it...

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Amir Forougi 13 November 2011

The great sense of serenity and kindness of mother....

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Pondering6649 H 12 November 2011

Very nice words. I liked the play on words! If your mum hasnt see it...it would make a lovely gift! :)

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