Bitter Butter Poem by Putholi Arumugham

Bitter Butter

Rating: 4.3


Dont think of her again
surely you shall go insane
my mom adviced me
oh mom let it be
I replied her
being erratic for my brain
is far far better
rather than just being
like a rotten butter

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kat , sorrow 19 May 2007

I like this one good work Love Kat, sorrow

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Sarah Sisson 20 December 2008

Ew! you pained that picture...I wouldnt want to be that girl! Great write!

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Pia Andersson 13 October 2007

I love it! ! the title is perfect Bitter butter sound just right... Wishing you a lovely day Pia

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James Niles 30 August 2007

Betty Batter bought a bit of bitter butter, but she said this butter's bitter, so she bought a bit of better butter, now she's better for this bit of bitter butter that now is better butter. Cheers, again!

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mar num 10 August 2007

yup i lk this one but if only u had a little more emotion on wat you feel other than rotten butter but its all good

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Alison Cassidy 19 May 2007

Ah yes, Putholi, the drama is so much for worthwhile than the emptiness. Great title too. love, Allie xxxx

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