Bitter Honey Poem by Jahan Zeb

Bitter Honey

Rating: 4.4


Destined to be born but not to grow,
The little baby sleeping in his cot,
Expecting his new world a happy flow,
Knows not his God, custom nor his faith,
You gave life, like (in sunshine) snow,
Not snow, was like a crystal ice,
It broke; pieces scattered, and melted,
A sorry or some dollar will not do,
Lives you have taken, hundreds lives,
Have broken not utensil or cheap knives,
The soulless bees are pouring but no honey,
Sending death to baby in his cot,
The member men are learned and philosopher,
Can't find ways to let the baby prosper,
Stop shooting them from sky UNO,
Killed why? Most of them don't know.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Written for all those Children who are killed before they understand the complexity of life.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Persian Khushi 20 September 2012

heart gripping knowing they never had a chance, tears of mothers, numbed by drilling of war planes... excellent writing Jahan!

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Hazel Durham 20 September 2012

A very deep, visual poem about the terrible consequences of war on innocent victims, great write!

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Dr Sruthi Varma 21 September 2012

heart touching..showing the pain of innocent lives..

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Dave Walker 25 September 2012

A fantastic poem, powerful work. A great write.

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Payal Parande 26 September 2012

really a heartfelt and a bitter truth...a power full write sir but i do wish you don't have write poem on this subject again...... thank you for sharing, love payal

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Chinedu Dike 02 February 2020

Really a heartrending story written in verse with rhythmic splendour. An insightful piece of poetry.

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Heather Wilkins 05 June 2013

let the children live and grow to be happy adults. They are God's gift to man. Sad but true write

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Heather Wilkins 05 June 2013

let the children live and grow to be happy adults. They are God's gift to man. Sad but true write

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Shai Cherry 08 November 2012

such deep meaning makes you think

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Roong S 25 October 2012

This is very touching..

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