Dom Hunt

Rookie - 13 Points (17/04/1966 / geelong)

Bitterness Of Deceit - Poem by Dom Hunt

Many things can bring you down
And crush your very soul
Heart may break a thousand times
Take a endless toll

Days seem to never end
Darkness grows all around
The grind of existence 
Tries to bury you in the ground
 
These times  seem so hard
Hope seems to disappear 
But something else can crush
And destroy all that's dear

It comes so unexpected
No time to retreat 
Nothing compares to
Bitterness of deceit 


Comments about Bitterness Of Deceit by Dom Hunt

  • Rookie - 415 Points Captain Cur (7/27/2012 8:05:00 AM)

    Nice poem with a good twist ending.
    Good write. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, July 27, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, July 27, 2012


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