Black Crows Poem by Eric Cockrell

Black Crows

Rating: 3.5


Darkness and light, wrong and right
thoughts bleed and dissolve, dreams evolve
paper and smoke, churn and stroke
prayers drip like sweat, slavery and debt

White trash fires, unholy liars
truth falls off the edge, desire walks the ledge
political drugs, who picks the judge
hammers of fear, moments lost to years

Graves open and close, nuclear rose
black shadows turn, pages crumple and burn
lightning or gunfire, stakes higher and higher
death clock chimes, wind thru the pines...
black crows on the lines... black crows on the lines...

Mothers crying and cold, babies bought and sold
welfare Cadillacs, anxiety attacks
trailor tub meth, lonesome last breath
kneeling by the bed, prayers for the dead

Runaways lost, who pays the cost
nursing home ghosts, headstones and posts
pictures turning yellow, goodbyes and hellos
people folded and spent, no messengers sent...

Graves open and close, nuclear rose
black shadows turn, pages crumple and burn
lightning or gunfire, stakes higher and higher
death clock chimes, wind thru the pines...
black crows on the lines... black crows on the lines...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terence George Craddock 02 September 2011

It seems the judges and the Supreme court are picked by presidents and politicians who they serve to the detriment of the common people. Judges are supposed to uphold laws that benefit an entire society, all the people living in the nation. When dreams are broken and too many within our countries suffer, have no hope, nothing to lose, then is a nation at peril from within. It is time to spend less on prison that punish and more on solutions that empower citizens to help themselves. A better education, employment creation schemes and a little hope for those born with less opportunities is not only morally and ethically correct, it also makes good business sense.

0 0 Reply
R Stansfield 23 July 2011

i love this style, keep it up, great

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success