Black Darkness Poem by Emily Sleator aka Katastrophic Kyte3 NopyGirrl

Black Darkness

Rating: 2.8


Black the color of my cold heart
The guiltiness of a murder
bold, hard, solid matter
Yumm, the taste of poison and humanpies
the horrible stench of blood and burnt roses
Thousands of needles getting stuck in you
Feels like darkness crawling upon your skin
makes you want death
Longing for light
Cruelty beyond belief
Made up of hatred
Demons torturing you till you
Cant fight no more
Surrender
Why do you think people wear black to funerals?
Feeds upon your fear and terror
Ahhhh! !
Screams, crying, laughter of evil, shattering glass,
Blood splattering, wailing of misery.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Smith 17 January 2009

Amazing imagery entwined with brutal bruntness. Keep on writing! :)

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Evaughn Gray 06 February 2009

'The horrible stench of blood and burnt roses', that was just so beautiful, i loved this line! ~ Hazel G.E

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Kevin Carney 04 August 2010

Wow, this is a great write there are so many ways I took this. Dark, brooding yet so much pent up emmotion in this. Wanted more at the end. Nice job.

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Resa Lynn 07 December 2009

lots of meaning too this poem well done

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Woah, that was really creepy, but in an artistically beautiful way. I don't know how to feel after reading that. I have felt like what you read before though. I can tell you put a lot of emotion in this one.

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Sarah Abdullah 15 April 2009

Love the way of your describtion.... So well Written... Good one indeed..

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Kerli Undead 07 February 2009

well written, shows deep emotion love it X3

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