Black Petals Poem by Timothy Weiermann

Black Petals

Rating: 5.0


A petal as black as night can be
In it's petals nothing you'll see
With thorns sharp,
Your blood melds with the land
The pain of love
Is now known to man



(one of my earlier poems written in my 1st year of poetry)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ryan Thompson 16 October 2008

hey this is pretty neat good job yo!

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Brittany graviet 06 October 2008

so many meanings may be pulled out of this. very inspiring

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Anjali Sinha 05 October 2008

oops! ! ! ! thorns and blood ive been pricked my heart bleeds ++++++++++10 tim my dear fren always love anjalie

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Ashraful Musaddeq 10 September 2008

It is a good compositon, good imegery.

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Silence Dogood 08 September 2008

Its not bad but you should add more.

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