Ashley Bachtel

Rookie (June 23,1994 / Canton, Ohio)

Black Star - Poem by Ashley Bachtel

Black Star, Black Star
I wish I'd know where you are.
I need a wish, to help me out
in my dark world full of doubt.

Black Star, Black Star
shining brighter than the rest,
You're hiding in your deep dark nest.
Come out to play, its safe I say
I need you, you're the only way.

Black Star, Black Star,
hiding away oh so deep.
Black Star, Black Star
watch me as I fall asleep...

Comments about Black Star by Ashley Bachtel

  • Rookie Robert Price (2/22/2012 2:18:00 PM)

    Nicely done. I like the rhythm and the verbs until falling asleep. Paints a nice picture. (Report) Reply

    7 person liked.
    2 person did not like.
  • Silver Star - 4,127 Points Dave Walker (1/25/2012 1:29:00 PM)

    A great poem, like it. A great write.
    May i invite you to read my new poem called,
    An Angel Cries. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, January 25, 2012

Poem Edited: Wednesday, February 22, 2012

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