Blackbird And I. Poem by Fay Slimm

Blackbird And I.

Rating: 5.0


A bundle of melody my blackbird.
Love- on- the- wing songster, piping his world
Into ecstacy, dawn to dusk. Noteworthy
Bird of large beak and eye, when tongue's unfurled
He pours our liquid gold, trilling lyrics
That melt the soul. Blackbird and I at times
Seem to vye with exchanges. A bitty
Performance by one, but not he, as naught
But he knows his song, once begun I'm caught
Up and stand listening as he knows I ought.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

this is captivating.. i loved it..

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Fiona Davidson 11 April 2009

This is such a refreshing write Fay....brings the reader into the scene with your words....Fi10+++

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Sandra Martyres 11 April 2009

Charming poem Fay...singing a duet with a blackbird.

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Sue Sie 11 April 2009

Beautifully described..a duet....the birds sing wonders...lovely Fay..10++ Sue x

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 11 April 2009

this is the opposite of the raven by EAP wow nice words here u amazing!

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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