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Blame me for everything,
Spare me for nothing,
I left behind special thing,
My memory to miss something,
It was to last and something to cherish,
Till I am forgotten and completely perished,
My soul still roams and not finished,
Blot on old cloths removed andwashed
I was awaiting a simple death,
To live alive in memory and breath,
So till last I may have say,
With beautiful time and day
All dues and regards I pay,
Still she may have all the say,
She may have hopes in sun rays,
I still hesitate and remember in many ways,
I will remain calm and narrate,
Always grant her higher the rate,
May be it was my fate,
What to write and what to state,
I had simple memory as clean slate,
I may be called or addressed as late,
I may have long wait to decide the fate
Before it is. All over and nothing to state
hasmukh amathalal
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Comments about this poem (Blame me
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Mayra Cerda (2/6/2010 2:49:00 PM)
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I agree with gloria massengo i love this poem it's nice and well thought out impressive 10/10
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g black black (12/1/2009 7:48:00 PM)
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I LOVE THIS POEM, , ITS AMAZING AND A LITLE BIT SAD, , IT MADE ME THINK OF MY FAVORITE SONG
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Pradip Pillai (11/7/2009 7:57:00 PM)
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Blame me for everything,
Spare me for nothing,
I left behind special thing,
My memory to miss something,
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Winnie Angel (10/17/2009 6:50:00 PM)
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Yeah ya shd be blame for everything! for the wonderful piece bringing forth for reading..Winnie
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Mae Wiseacre (10/15/2009 11:37:00 AM)
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Beautiful poem! I love the flow to it! ! !
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V H Ferguson (9/20/2009 7:44:00 AM)
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I love what this poem is saying, there are some beautiful lines in this. Well done - 10
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Sagarika Shah (9/7/2009 7:40:00 AM)
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Blame me for everything,
Spare me for nothing,
I left behind special thing,
My memory to miss something, ......10
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Twinkle Vohra (9/7/2009 7:33:00 AM)
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Blame me for everything,
Spare me for nothing,
I left behind special thing,
My memory to miss something, .10
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Sangita Rao (9/3/2009 10:26:00 PM)
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It was to last and something to cherish,
Till I am forgotten and completely perished,
My soul still roams and not finished,
Blot on old cloths removed andwashed.......10
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