Blasphemer Poem by Paige Nielsen

Blasphemer

Rating: 4.0


exordium:
H.P. Lovecraft’s heretic pride.
She is suffering,
a girl disappearing into the thorns
woven into crowns.
Her roses are bloody like the moon.
In cults of crucifixion,
marble lions roar amid the falling snow.
Indelible sin, taints of innocence,
her curse is your love song.
terminus.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kaitlyn Henning 16 April 2009

Very well written. I like the imagery.

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Catina Crum 08 April 2009

I enjoy how you begin and end with a single word. Beautiful imagery... 'marble lions roar amid the falling snow.' I'm in love with the image created in my mind. Your style is distinct, but I still think you are growing and transforming as a writer. : ] Exciting.

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