Marieta Maglas

Veteran Poet - 1,134 Points (19-05-1964 / Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania)

****bleeding Words^^≫≫≫ - Poem by Marieta Maglas

To talk with you doesn't make any sense,
When your bloody words can hurt me so much.
An exciting show is your best defense,
Slaughtered thoughts drop nakedly at the soul's touch.


The bleeding screams are sutured in my soul.
In time, the silence of this torment grips
Some domination for a selfish goal,
While inconceivable are my truth's lips.


Why don't you give me a chance to leave you?
I'm a prisoner in this drama of love.
Between deformed walls, this jazz is a blue
Stretch of the sky to reach the stars above.

© Marieta.Maglas 2010
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Form: Blues Poem


Comments about ****bleeding Words^^≫≫≫ by Marieta Maglas

  • Rookie Prateep Sengupta (6/5/2012 4:17:00 AM)

    I am really moved by the significance and beauty of two lines: Thoughts are slaughtered in flocks and herds and I am the golden prisoner of the unsaid words. These are amazing expressions. Deep regards for your poetic self. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 377 Points Patti Masterman (9/6/2011 1:34:00 PM)

    We want to be understand- we want words to speak for us- to be misunderstood is pain. To have meanings we did not intend forced upon our own words is unbearable.
    There is real, baffling, bleeding awareness in all these lines, and so I think that it must be true. I do not force implied meanings, I only try to interpret between the lines, the meat of the matter.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kevin Carney (10/5/2010 12:13:00 AM)

    The screams become the stitches in your mouth.
    Your silence torments and eats inside me.
    You hurt me and this is an inconceivable truth.
    Please, leave me away, I want to be free.

    These are very powerful lines. Such a sad poem and so well written. Thank you for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 44 Points Malaya Roses (7/21/2010 11:08:00 PM)

    Sometimes words sharper than sword but in certain occasion words can smooth our mind and emotions.
    what i can feel from this poem is only hurt and wound caused by words. Human tounge can be twisted, poisonus and destroy other hopes and peace.
    Don't care what people may said, as long as we can find our happiness in ourselves and joy within compassionate life; it is enough.
    Very nice poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Cain XXX (7/13/2010 6:51:00 AM)

    the imagery is beautiful and the emotions of pain and anguish are very nicely drawn out. thanks for sharing! :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 6 Points Dr.tony Brahmin (5/19/2010 2:19:00 PM)

    Leave me with all the pain and let me see again.
    I am the golden prisoner of the unsaid words.

    While I wait to go to Heaven to receive my rewards

    your cry... let me see again.. i am the goldern prisoner...lovely expressions. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 25 Points Kranthi Pothineni (4/6/2010 2:53:00 PM)

    A painful write. No idea what had inspired you to write this. Moving craft. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Salvie Rosales (4/6/2010 9:41:00 AM)

    'Bleeding words' is so expressive, it reaches to the bones of the readers...nice piece. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,134 Points Marieta Maglas (4/5/2010 7:24:00 PM)

    From : Yulissa Fregoso (california United States; Female; 12)
    To : Marieta Maglas
    Date Time : 4/3/2010 4: 00: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject : Hi

    HI
    I have read your poems DANCE OF LOVE and BLEEDING WORDS they are really goood and i have commented on them so please read and comment on some of my poems THANK YOU


    YOUR FRIEND
    YULISSA FREGOSO (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Braja K Sarkar (4/5/2010 3:40:00 AM)

    Very thoughtful, touching poem..I like it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Yulissa Fregoso (4/3/2010 3:57:00 PM)

    INCREDIBLE this poem really touches me heart (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 15 Points Eyan Desir (4/3/2010 6:07:00 AM)

    This poem is very clear to me
    It has a fine poetic touch
    good write my friend (Report) Reply

  • Rookie sky dreams (4/3/2010 6:07:00 AM)

    such a strong message and beautifully written.. well done =) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie D H (4/2/2010 8:11:00 PM)

    Painful but have beauty
    Weeping with sorrow but freedom I see
    A amazing poem
    I shall read more (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 196 Points Dr.subhendu Kar (3/27/2010 11:51:00 AM)

    Leave me with all the pain and let me see again.
    I am the golden prisoner of the unsaid words.
    Between deforming walls, I always keep my strain,
    While I wait to go to Heaven to receive my rewards................

    yet pain never feels pain reeling through
    words when untold still reasons to smolder
    as when plaintive cry beneath shadow of promise
    heart even blown never wrest tears by sorrow, most poignant write on the rune of stance yet by riff of reason beyond and beneath,10++++, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 25, 2010

Poem Edited: Wednesday, February 18, 2015


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