Blind Dancer Poem by Marieta Maglas

Blind Dancer

Rating: 5.0


The blue, blind dancer slips on the floor,
And enhances the movement itself in an icy dance.
This woman is transformed
Alternatively
Into a bluebird
And vice versa.
More accurately,
She becomes a birdwoman
For an absolute motion.
From the depth of her soul,
Divine lights
Begin to overflow the space.
Small crystal pieces belonging to her sad feeling
Become roughly cube-shaped pieces of ice.
They roll in the middle of nowhere.
The blue sound is necessary to expound those words
In a natural and ordinary sense...

Copyright © ® Marieta Maglas. All rights reserved.

Thursday, May 21, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: blues,dance,dancing,bird
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ramesh T A 20 June 2009

Nice poem to read! Floating or dancing it is difficult to feel!

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The space, And give it the appropriate, necessary meaning it is work of third eye with common sense and intense training.. beautiful write with vivd description and depth....10 read mine' no separate ways, tragic end and sister in lasw

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Chesney Russell 15 August 2009

I love the idea of a blind dancer, I look around and try copying others when I dance, and pretty much constantly hash it up. In a way I wish I was a blind poetry reader, without influence, just me and my own style. Cool, thanks.

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Agnes Parker 02 October 2009

nice poem....thank you for sharing 10

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Ramin Chaman 27 October 2009

A humanist poem.and humanity ..really a nice poem... from a good poetess ///

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Elena Sandu 13 March 2010

I fly with this words, thank you for sharing! Lovely! !

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Sandra Fowler 14 February 2010

Your blind dancer is a poem in blue. Very compelling and beautiful. Your words have wings.10/10. Warm regards, Sandra

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Manuel Odeny 05 January 2010

Beautiful description will words potrayed vivvidly. ++10

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Marieta Maglas 01 December 2009

From: Dick Badian (Netherlands ;) To: Marieta Maglas Date Time: 11/2/2009 6: 52: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: forever yours hello Marietta. I promise i will get deeper in your work. I sniffed arround.saw some beautifull pieces.so as soon as i can find more time I will dive into your thoughts. kind regards stuiterdick

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Maegan Trafford 18 November 2009

very meaningful write, well penned.... 10

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Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania
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