Treasure Island

Alice Vedral Rivera

(Chicago, Illinois, USA)

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Topic(s): blood

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

*Part of my book, 'Shadows on the Carpet II' - 'Contaminated' section

Comments about this poem (*Blood Red Roses by Alice Vedral Rivera )

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  • Frank James Ryan, Jr. (11/3/2006 5:18:00 PM)

    Thats a lovely description of roses! I loved the poem! Oh, and thanks for the comment on my first poem on ph. :) -Lauren
    xoxoxox (Report) Reply

  • Scarlett Treat (8/19/2006 4:24:00 PM)

    If he hit her with words, she bleeds blood red internally.
    If he hit her with fists, she bleeds blood red externally,
    And when enough blood is shed,
    He brings her his 'Sorry, ' or 'Love, ' and blood red roses.

    AWSOME WRITING, ALICE, JUST AWSOME! ! (Report) Reply

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